posted Wednesday April 23rd, 2014
one day me and my grandma are going to the mall and we got lunch and then we went shopping for cloths and then we went to h and m and then we bumped into Sarah and her mom i said that can i sleep over together and we went out for dinner we got sushi and we loved it so much and we went to back other house and we go to see my old friend her name is Mackenzie and she haves a bull dog it was awesome time and we went to see aldc and we saw all of the people there i saw the girl and wen to to the studio i was the best there we went to the stage i dance with the girl”s it was awesome we won Abbie was proud of us we got 1000 place we got diner together and then we all went to bed in the same bed but the grown ups did not sleep in the bed they never see me ever and the i lived there
And the edited version:
One day my grandma and I went to the mall and we got lunch and then we went shopping for clothes and then we went to H & M. And then we bumped into Sarah and her mom. I asked if we could have a sleepover together and we went out for dinner. We got sushi. And we loved it so much and we went to another house to see my old friend. Her name is Mackenzie. And she has a bulldog. It was an awesome time and we went to see the Abby Lee Dance Company. We saw all of the people there. I saw the girl and went to the studio. I was the best there. We went to the stage, I danced with the girls. It was awesome. We won. Abby was proud of us, we got 1000 place. We got dinner together and then we all went to bed in the same bed but the grown ups did not sleep in the bed. They never see me ever, and I lived there.